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Post by Wilhelm Runettes on Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:10 pm

Yah, ini adalah tempat kalian berkomentar mengenai cerita saya, Einsamkeit. Dari sekian banyak cerita, baru yang ini saya post di forum ini *hahaha*. Untuk chapter pertama, saya menggunakan Qeyz's POV. Dan mungkin di chapter berikutnya, akan menggunakan 3rd POV. Habis, saya kurang lihai dengan penggunaan 1st POV, makaya chapter awal ini kacau sekali, nai~

silahkan dikomentari habis-habisan (_ _)

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Post by F-Taker on Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:44 am

Hua!!! ceritanya bagus!!!!
Bikin lagi dong Wil-san! *Shot*
Saya gak nemu typo, uhm... kayaknya itu saja deh...
Jangan pernah menyerah bikin FFic lagi ya Wil-san/Plak!/
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Post by Wilhelm Runettes on Sun Sep 05, 2010 3:09 am

Arigatou Smile

padahal saya udah lama gak ngetik cerita macam gini *ngakak* <<bohong(?)
yah~ tunggulah cerita lanjutannya =))

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Post by Arthady Kimaru on Sun Sep 05, 2010 7:12 am

Awalnya kukira ini before story Wilhelm. Rupanya original ._.
Bagus xDb mata dwiwarna? Vincent! *______* *plak
Ngomong-ngomong karakternya berambut gimana? Saya kalo ngebayangin karakter pake warna mata sama rambut (maaf kalo udah tertulis, baca cepat -_- )
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Post by Wilhelm Runettes on Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:45 am

Wakakak =)) kalo si Wilhelm, ntar judulnya "Retrace His Memories" kalo ga "Black Roses in the Hell" *plak*
hmmm... Kalo Faldione tuh mirip Prussia di Hetalia =)) kalo Qeyz agak mirip Reo, tapi rambutnya dikuncir =)) *plak*

percaya gak percaya, saya bikin chara Qeyz gara2 inget Reo =)) cuma bolamatanya dwiwarna XD

insya Allah besok lanjut, nai~

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Post by Arthady Kimaru on Tue Sep 07, 2010 7:40 am

@: Prussia! *.* Reo? Reo anime apa??
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Post by Wilhelm Runettes on Tue Sep 07, 2010 8:19 am

@^: ya PH! =)) nih... Reo itu yang ini [dari bawah: Elliot, Reo, Oz, kucing(?)]

btw, chapter 2 part 1 posted :3

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Post by Arthady Kimaru on Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:29 pm

ebujud.. Reo kiut tauk! OwO (never get enough of PH)

(kembali fast reading) Satu masukan... yaoi hint? ._. <-- the innocent(?) fujoshi girl has return muahahaha!! *dijedotin
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Post by Wilhelm Runettes on Fri Sep 10, 2010 6:50 am

Ting tong~!
anda benaaaaar! XD
di chapter 2 part 2 ada yaoi :3

tapi katanya sih...rating cuma 12+ ._. *pundung* saya gagal oTL

chap 2 part 2 posted :3

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Post by Arthady Kimaru on Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:29 am

BUJUD! Itu +18! +18!!! *tereakstress
Meskipun rated +12 aku juga nggak nyaman kalo baca dialog 'erangan' pas ada adekku--plakplak apalagi yaoi pula (normal aja blushed >///< ) but that was fun *dilibas
Di title thread kasih tanda +18 dong xDD hahahah

ada account FFN ya? (/me at http://fanfiction.net/~hotaruyuzuka )
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Post by Wilhelm Runettes on Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:01 am

Ahahahaha Smile)
belum 18+ kok~ baru 12+ *plak*
aih~ itu kan belum seberapa... pinginnya nambah sih, tapi malesnya minta ampun *plak*

ada sih, belum submit story sama sekali. ingat, SAMA SEKALI! =)) *plak*
http://fanfiction.net/~recquesterqeyz

untuk Chapter 3, sabar ya... saya lagi mikirin ending yang keren =)) *plak*

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Post by T-Mikk on Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:37 am

Walah~ itu +18 tapi menurutku cuma +12~!!!! Yaoi!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!!!
Fanficnya keren!!!!
Saya suka pas bagian erangan! Hahahahaha!! *Ketawan sifat lakknatnya*
Berjuang terus Will-senpai!
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Post by Arthady Kimaru on Thu Jul 21, 2011 9:49 am

ayo update! *nyepam*
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